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A drawing I did for an art assignment. The gray lines you see in her hair were actually lines made by a silver gel pen, but that didn't come out too well when scanned. I stuffed the kimono, I know, but... yeah...
Please comment!!! I want to improve!!!! I'm only 12 years old, ya know?

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:icontakalakabambam:
yay! you made a deviation!! ^^

Oh, and it says "advanced critique encouraged."

I don't know if you yourself want that or not, but here goes....

Next time, when you scan it, make it brighter, and draw the lines darker.

For a smoother finish, i try to take twice as much time on coloring than drawing on purpose, but you might already do that ^^

The wings could improve (please don't take offense!!), draw a fine line of a boomerang shape for each one, than add long feathers coming out of it, then a few fuzzy ones at the base. (to get the idea of what I'm saying, see my pic of an angel [link] its really rough and just a sketch tho ^^; )

Wow, this is long..... but anyway, yeah the face is real good (looks like ceres style almost!!) and its really pretty.

P.S. you're 12?? i'm 13!! :highfive:

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:iconbandaiblossom:
Thx!!! Yeah, I know that the wings aren't too great... I wasn't gonna have them at the back, they were going to "encase" the angel/curve around the front, but then you wouldn't be able to see the details on the body. (And it wouldn't fit!!!) I'm kinda pleased with the result, though.

P.S: I AM A HUGE, I MEAN HUGE FAN OF YUU WATASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

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:icontakalakabambam:
yesh!! it is gorgious.

P.S: I AM, I MEAN I AM TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

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:icontakalakabambam:
Oh yeah, and when u want to write back to me, click the reply button on my comment. Or else i wont get it. I got urs cuz i went back 2 the pic.

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:iconbandaiblossom:
Okay. Thanks for the tips. YOU LIKE YUU WATASE!?!!!!!!!??? YAY!!!!!!!

Have you read Fushigi Yuugi?

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:iconmiss-you9:
hello! OMG It is so cute! I kinda agree with what takalakabambam is saying though. But I still think it's adorable!!!
:iconmanga-monkey:
i luv it!it is sooooooooooo cool, the colours need a tinch of brightning. otherwise, it's perfect!
:iconbandaiblossom:
Thanks. My scanner is kinda busted though. That's why the colours are stuffed.

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:iconvivelda:
heloooo. i saw your post on dm :D
this is good :thumbsup: i like how you did the eyes

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